Sheffield Road, Birdwell, Barnsley, S70 5XB

Improving our writing..

Year 2 have been working on editing and improving their writing.

They were given some very boring sentences and had to write some new and improved ones. They all spotted punctuation errors and corrected them.

Lots of lovely group work..


We then presented our new piece of writing in groups and voted which one sounded the most interesting.

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